英语写作高分常用方法强化总结归纳
方法一 列举具体的实例来补充说明 
1．我喜欢体育运动。
   I like sports very much. 
   →I like sports very much，such as basketball and football.
2．青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。
We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. 
→ We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags，refuse to use single¬use products，plant more trees and save water and energy.
方法二  添加与所给信息有关的神态、动作、心理描写及背景渲染等内容
1. 晚饭后，这个男的走向卧室。
   After supper，the man went to his bedroom. 

   → After a rich meal，the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.(神态、动作)

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2. 我看到了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behavior. 
→  I found some bad behavior.I was quite disappointed to find some bad behavior.(心理)
方法三  添加与所给信息有关的原因，结果，条件，让步，手段，目的等内容 
1．Tracy 来电话留言：咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消。
拓展：因为她有重要的事情处理。(原因)
Tracy called，saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee. 
→ Tracy called，saying that she couldn't meet you at Ban Coffee，as she has something important to attend to.
2．帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。
拓展：孩子们进步很快，我也受到他们父母的称赞。(结果)
I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. 
→  I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.To my joy，they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me.
方法四  结尾发挥，写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等 
1．Although I stood all the way home，I felt very happy for what I did.
2．I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.

请你根据下图，结合实际，以Responsibilities为题写一篇英语短文，分析考试后家长、学生、老师对考试结果的反应，并结合当前实际发表你的见解。
注意：1.仔细品味画面内容，要适当发挥想象，不要作简单描述。
2．词数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
4．相关词汇：配合co­operate；和谐的harmonious；效率efficiency
Responsibilities
Recently，parents，students and teachers sometimes care much about test results，especially when kids fail.
Some parents，when their kids fail in an exam，choose to                                              
【参考范文】
Responsibilities
Recentlyparentsstudents_and_teachers_sometimes_care_much_about_test_results，especially_when_kids_fail.
Some_parents，when_their_kids_fail_in_an_exam，choose_to yell at their kids and complain much about present education system while their kids would blame the bad results on teachers. Teachers，who always work hardest，have more complaints like lack of co­operation from parents and less hard work of students. What should be the appropriate attitude towards test results is always under hot discussion. Gladly，most parents nowadays are quite aware of their own responsibilities. They would co­operate more with teachers afterwards and give enough guidance to their kids. Teachers will undoubtedly re­consider and thus improve their teaching methods aiming to increase classroom efficiency. Students will certainly study harder.
In my opinion，it is always the best for family，students and schools to co­operate closely. When kids fail，everybody should be brave enough to bear responsibilities and find practical solutions to avoid similar mistakes.It surely benefits a lot in the construction of a harmonious society as well as forming a friendly relationship between families and schools.
【解析】
本文是属于半开放性作文，是典型的图画型作文。本文文体也是一篇议论文，议论文体在高考试题中并不是经常出现的题型，近三年内没有出现该文体的考查。尽管如此，高考命题中，除了应用文体外，一般所能考查到的就是议论文或记叙文两种文体了，我们并不能掉以轻心。议论文体的重点是论点鲜明、论据充分、必须有说服力，并能够按照要求在合理范围内发挥合理的想象力，把自己的观点充分表达出来。

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